When we begin a journey, we’re excited. We pack our suitcase, imagining the moments to come. The thrill of our destination courses through us, spurring us on. We begin with high hopes for what we’ll encounter.
I remember when I prepared for my trip to France not long ago how excited I was go to Paris, then Lyon and the southern mountains where Cezanne and Van Gogh used to paint. It was of course a wonderful trip—the vision of the Eiffel Tower even better than my imagination, but there were challenges—the suitcase was too heavy to lift upstairs, the Metro was stuffed with TONS of people, and I got lost dozens of times on tiny country lanes. There were moments of being exhausted, and others of being exhilarated. But the images I had when I packed my suitcase changed. The real journey was different, and it changed me.
So, it is when we write a memoir. We begin putting in our suitcase the memories, people, and events that we’re eager to celebrate and remember. Even if our story is a dark one, we have a handle on it; we’ve been journaling and we know the basics of the story. We launch into our writing eagerly, capturing images and moments, freely writing, doing research. We even feel brave enough to tell people we’re writing a book!
Then something happens. The doubts creep in, “I’m not sure what I wrote is the real truth. My sister says I made things up.” Or, “Gee, I don’t want to reveal x and y and z. It’s too personal. I don’t want people knowing all these things about me.” Or you read a bunch of other memoirs and think that you can’t write well enough, you feel that it’s really too big a job, this memoir project. You decide to put it away for a while.
There’s another scenario: You’re starting to remember things, memories you thought you’d handled, you begin to reflect on the past in a new way, and start to write about it, but you feel sad, depressed or angry. You try to put it all aside, but you can’t. The writing doesn’t work. You are stuck in the middle of your book, you feel conflicted. You put the project away.
This is all good news. I know, it doesn’t sound like good news to you. You just want to get your memoir done! You want to brush away the doubts.
The good news is that you are in the middle of your memoir journey, and you’re doing fine. There are three major stages in writing a memoir. The first is the eager beginning, “downloading” as some people call it. Then there’s the Muddy Middle, where themes, stories, and memories begin to build into a larger story, one that you don’t have control of. The muddy middle is the biggest part of the journey, by the way.
The later stage is where you find your stride, the journey has changed you, and you are grateful for the riches it gives you. It’s not the same journey you imagined. You are different. The muddy middle becomes your teacher, your mentor. As Dr. James Pennebaker, says, “Story is a way of knowledge.” He has done hundreds of studies that show how writing helps to heal trauma and create a new story for you
Some tips for your trip:
- Accept that writing your memoir is a longer journey than you imagined. Be patient.
- Take good care of yourself on the journey. Rest, set a schedule, make a map.
- Allow the writing process to guide you, allow in the unwanted stories, images, and memories. They have something to teach you.
- Trust in your creative muse, the excitement you felt when you began your journey. Allow it to urge you forward.
- Invite your unconscious to help you write and remember.
- Know that you will write the same story over and over again, but in a new way. Know that you will find the muddy middle, that you will get stuck and lost, but keep going.
- You will find your way out of the muddy middle if you just keep writing!
Thanks for another really helpful article 🙂
I’m sitting in Starbucks holding back tears. I came across your article at the perfect time, thank you!
Thanks SO much for this! I am exactly in the ‘muddy middle’ now and can relate to every single thing in this article.lol
Thanks for helping me see that all my doubts are really just part of the process.
Thank you for explaining its a process. I thought I was going crazy for awhile there. Nope, I’m sane, and in my stride to the end of my latest edited revision. Yep, I’m in the last stage of this journey. P.S. I signed up for your April 17 webinar:)
Untangling memories through writing has helped me understand so much of my life. It’s an integral part of my day in comprehending the past, present, and future. A friendly ghost you could say.